im back !


    so a few people liked it .


    good enough  for me


    i will write a another chapter. please help me if you can and want it. that would be great !


    this can be done by help me with the grammar any many more because i do suck at writing but not so much at thinking .( i think)                       (by the way i will change somethings,  some for the better i hope)


    ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------[table]<tr><td>you get the blessing from GOD Heka</td></tr><tr><td>you get the blessing from GOD Lugh</td></tr><tr><td>you get the blessing from GOD Chronos</td></tr><tr><td>you get the blessing from GOD Ares</td></tr>David [ huh? whats this ?]


    <table><tbody><tr><td> GOD ??? hello David this must freak you out.


    but don''t worry this normal in this world.


    a few friends blessed you, you lucky dog!


    be sure to do funny stuff  </td></tr></tbody></table>


    <table><tbody><tr><td> you get the blessing from THE ONE GOD ???</td></tr></tbody></table>


    Find this and other great novels on the author''s preferred platform. Support original creators!David [ what the actual f*ck is this?]


    David [ and where am i ?]


    David [ i feel tired , i think i''m gonna sleep]


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    nine months later.


    David [ WHAT IS THIS IS SO TIGHT, I SEE SOME LIGHT .


    David [ IT FEELS SO WRONG!!! I WILL REMEMBER  THIS FOR EVER . F*CK MY LIFE ALREADY]


    David [QUES THAT MY NEW DAD , DO THAT ALREADY FUUUUUUU


    - the midwive gave David to a man -


    ???: it''s a girl !


    David [ NO NOT A GIRLS BODY IM GONNA KILL THAT GOD ]


    David : cry noise .


    - the men give the new born girl to his wife-


    ??? : Jerul it''s a boy !! It is just tiny, look again.


    Jerul : he you are right!


    David [ few so not a girl ? yes thank you god!


    - the cry noise stops-


    Jerul : look Mimmon  he is a stong child


    - trows the NEW BORN CHILD IN THE AIR- < joostieh dad is sure crazy>


    David [  WAAAA DAD IS CRAZY]


    Mimmon : Jerul give him to me!


    Mimmon : GET OUT!! YOU DON''T TROW A CHILD IN THE AIR !!


    Jerul : but honny i just wanted to know if he is strong!


    - Mimmon looks at Jerul with a look that the most strongest man to get scared-


    Jerul : im going.


    Mimmon : hi sweety, i am your new mommy.