I feel like my story telling abiltiy sucks so for this weekend the ff is going to go into major revisions mode and add ALOT more detail i will be done by sunday evening at the latest then will begin on the next chapters


    <table><tbody><tr><td colspan=''4''>Goals</td></tr><tr><td colspan=''4''>*To not suck so hard


    *Add serious plot and prologue


    Did you know this story is from Royal Road? Read the official version for free and support the author.                     *Merge a couple chapters


    *Tone down the character a wee bit</td></tr></tbody></table>


    I will enter these periods of mass revision every 10 chapters or so. If you want to throw in something now''s your chance to. Still need pr to help with my shite of a story as i cant see all the errors myself au demain