well hello everyone.


    ladies and gentlemen i have decided to do a revamp of the current story. Yes a revamp, that thing Writers say they will do but never return from.


    Honestly i have decided that i am not taking my hobby seriously enough, so i have decided to re-write everything, and by everything i mean like the 7 chapters that are up. originally i wanted to just power through this series and finish it first before i went back and did a re-vamp but a friend of mine on the net who also writes told me it is best to just do it now before i move on with my story. and honestly there are a few things i would like to change as well. so this will be the same story but different in a few places.


    A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.among other things i will also be implementing the whole ''show don''t tell'' thing, and hopefully writing a better prose.


    i will post the link to the new series,  on the fiction page here.  ¨it may take me a week or two.


    oh and btw i hate when writers do this- and by this i mean update their fiction and instead of a chapter a find a notice so sorry for that.