I would like to sincerely thank the people who reviewed this story. Escpecially Bluesappire.


    Thank you, your review was especially helpful.


    Now for those people who think I reviewed my own story on purpose, it is not so. That review was meant for Brave World Online.


    I know it will offend people who take the time to review my story and I sincerely apologize for my mistake. TT


    The story has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the violation.


    I plan to delete it ASAP but I cant seem to do it fron


    My phone


    I hope you will continue to stick with the story.


    Please comment your thoughts on the story or give it a review and help me grow as a writer