When Iwas writing this story Iwanted to start outwith the main character growing up pretty fast however as Iwas writing Idrew more and more out of focus for my original idea I also got to caught up in the main character''s power and should of wrote what happened more clearly.


    For example Iwanted to focus more on liz as an important character however Isoon got distracted and scratched that idea.I also feel like Istarted out the main character training his ability too early.Unauthorized content usage: if you discover this narrative on Amazon, report the violation.


    Ididnt have much fun writing the recent chapters and it defintly shows as they are the worst chapters so far. I found my self wanting to go ahead and skip over the growing up phases and get to my original idea


    Anyway the main pont im trying to make is do you want me to rewrite the early chapters or just continue to write more chapters