《Revenge of The Disturbed》
Chapter 1 (The Beginning)
"What brought me here."Leethought as he stared at the burning remaines that used to be his house ,the flames burning through the sky as ash fills the air ,everything he had was gone .
9years ago
Two kids are walking down a street, this is Lee Morrisand his best freind Liz.
"Come on liz we have been freinds since kindergarden please just tell me your real name". Says lee as he talks to his best freind
"You know Icant my family won''t let me tell anyone, this is the last time we talk about it! Liz exclaims a little annoyed at her freinds constant battering
"Okay Liz" Lee dejectivly says as he looked at the ground
"See you tommorow Liz." said Lee
"See ya". said Liz
as Lee was walking home he thoughtabout liz''s real name
"I wonder what it is." he thought
As lee was thinking that he saw something strange.
A black orb about the size of a soccer ball floating mid air wherever Lee walked the orb followed him, so he ran and ran as fast as he could to his house when he finaly got to his house he openedthe door as fast as he could and closed it faster.
As he finalylet out a breath of fresh air for finaly getting rid of that thing he thinks about what it could be.What the hell was that? Lee thought"Are you okay sweetie you look out of breath?" His mother saysStolen content alert: this content belongs on Royal Road. Report any occurrences.
Im fine mom. Lee says
"Your fathers home."she says
Lee completly forgot about the orb as she said that. His father works as a millitary medic and rarely is allowed to come home.
As soon as he heard that he ran to the living room to try to find his father when he gets there he sees a man in about his early 30''s sitting down on the brown recliener
"Hey son." He says as Lee jumps up to give his father a hug "Hey dad i missed you." lee says as he asks him to tell him stories about his time as a millitary medic.
They sat there for hours just with his father telling him stories about his millatary carear.
"Dinner time."Lees mother said as they go to the table to eat when he remembers the black orb he saw today
"Mom, dad when i was walking home fro-"He stoped mid sentence when he saw the familiar black orb in the corner of the room slowly rotating.
"Ahhhhh" he screamed
"Honey are you okay?"his mother askes frantically
However Lee didnt hear that all he saw was the orb as it slowly expanded first to the size of a beach ball all the way to the size of a door.
All the sudden a loud screaching sound appeared.
"What the hell was that!"Lees father exclaimed
Lee didnt hear that all he saw was an arm sticking out of the orb however this wasnt a humans arm it was twice as big as any arm he has ever seen it was red had long sharp claws.
He heard a deep voice boom
"This kid looks like a good snack."The voice boomed
His dad was the first to be undazed as he ran as fast as he could to the telephone to call the police.
All of the suddena thin dark red line appeared on his fathers neck as blood spilled out.
"aaahhhhhhhhhhh!"
His mother screamed as she picked up lee an ran as fast as she could to the door when she tripped.
Lee tumbled to the ground looked back at his mother.In the middle of her chest was an arm sticking out, blood gushed out of her chest.
"M - Mom!"Lee yelled as he saw the body that the arm was connected to it wasblood red with the legs of a goat and two horns sticking out of its head
"MOM DAD ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"Lee screamed when all of the sudden there was a flash of light and the creaturewas gone all that was left was the dead bodies of his parants.
Lee ran up to his mom and cried and cried for what seemed like hours until finaly he passed out.
Chapter 2 (Powers)
1 year later
Sitting alone in a room is a boy around 10 years old however his eyes where they should be clear and happy, are dead and cloudy.
{bang bang bang }
someone knocks on lees door "Lee we need to talk about what happened to your parants its been a year".
Lees grandmother said conserned.
"Not yet, please."Lee depresingly said
"Here let grandma show you something." she said as she grabbed onto lees hand and led him somewere. You know sometimes if reality gets to toughor you get sad you just escape.
"Escape?" lee asked curiously.
"Yes escape reality."she said as she led him somewere in thie giant house, that was rivaling a mansion. "How do you escape reality." Lee asked "Its simple you just hear a story."
"A story?"lee asked curiosly"Yes a story, sometimes a story can help you escape ,help you feel better." she said as she sat him down in the living room she got up and put something on the tv.
"Grandma i dont-" shh she said to Lees protests and forced Lee to watch the tv.
As he started watching he soon got immersed and when it ended he put another movie on and another
Do you feel better now Lee?his grandmother askedsoftly "Yea" Lee saidand smiled for the first time since the incident.
After the incident with his parants lee became an outcast he had to move away half way acrosss the world,hisonly freind was gone and soon he fell into a depresion .
So with his grandmothers advice he watched all the movies he could find and when he couldnt find any more he read books and when he didnt have any books he read comics or manga anything to distract himself from reality.
This went on and on for months until someone knocked on his bedroom door it was his grandma "Lee are you ready to talk about what happened to your parents" asked his grandma worriedly.
"I think Iam." Lee smiled trying to convince himself."You see it all started when-." As lee started to tell her everything to the orb, to him talking to his freind. "Am i crazy?"Lee asked his grandma worriedly.
"No lee your have a gift." Lees Grandma said reasuringly.Stolen novel; please report.
"I am about to tell you our familys biggest secret."lees grandmother said seriosly."What im about to tell you cant leave this room okay Lee."She said strictly"Okay grandma."Lee said"You see sometimes very rarely in our family, someone is born with psychic abilitys." "What are you talking about grandma." Lee said not believing in her "The last person in our family to have the gift was my mother your great grandmother." she said
"That can''t be true there is no such thing."Lee said
"Is it any more ridiculous than a creature coming out of a floating orb and killing people."She had a point Lee thought.
"Follow me." she said as she led lee to the library.
"You see you see everyone who has had the gift in our family wrote down there experiences to go to the future generations."She said as she she picked up an bigdusty book that looked like it hadnt been touched in years and handed it to Lee.
"Some people in our family hashad telikenesis, some had the ability to read others minds, as for what ability you have you have to figure it out yourself."She said
"Whats the point in learning how to control it,it''s not like it can help me any way." Lee said "Thats were your wrong honey."She said
"Do you remember the night of your parants death?" "How could Iforget." Lee said sadly
"Do you remember that helpless feeling the feeling of only being able to watch as people you hold dear are taken away from you" shesaid depresingly
"If you had these abilitys then your parents would still be alive."
"If you dont want anything like what happened that night then learn learn how to protect you and your loved ones."she said seriosly
"But grandma c-" He stopped in mid sentence"Can what?" Asked his grandma"Is it even possible for me to win against that thing" Lee asked.
"If you had mastered your abilitys you could have done it with just theflick of your wrist."
"Then Iwant to learn!" Lee said with determinationas he started reading the book.
"To first learn how to control your ability you must first learn what it is, in order to do that you need to meditate"
"you first need to clear your head and focus only on your body and your mind only then will you enter a meditative state"
"Once you are there you will see your ability, what your ability takes form of is what your power is"
"However not all abilitys are equal some might just let you think slightly faster and some will let you brainwash someone with just a thought"
"Here is a list of ablitiys that the objects represent"
"fire = pyrokinesis The ability to createand controlfire"
"water = hydrokinesis The ability to create and control water"
"spoon = telikenisis The ability to move objects with your mind"
"painting = chromokinesis The ability to manipulate color"
The bookwent through hundreds upon hundreds of abilitys.
"However be warned,if you do decide to meditate it has its risks it can and will severly damage you, give you brain damage or possibily death, if you are not carefull"
Seeing her grandson so immered in the book she told him one thing before leaving.
Tell me before you attempt to meditate it can be dangerous. His said grandmother warned. Okay grandma. Lee said and immediatly went back to reading.
Seeing her grandson focusing whole heartidly on the book she left him there to not disturb him.
Chapter 3 (Meditation)
Chapter 3 (Meditation)
As Lee read about abilitys and the people who had them in hisfamily one of them was his great great grandfather who had the ability ofvolukinesis. (the ability to control insects) there wasalso his great grandmother who had the ability of seismokinesis. (the ability to manipulate and genorate vibrations)
Lee was also curious what was his ability was. "I hope its something not something completly useless."He thought as he continued to read about meditation.
"The first thing you need to knough about psychic abilitys is that they all use mental energy. Mental energy is anything from your power itself to your consciousness everyone has a mental energy pool even people that dont have powers have one however people with powers have a bigger pool "
"While you are in your first meditative state your mental energy goes berserk the more powerfull your mental energy is the more dangerouse it is. However the largeryour mental energy pool is themore powerfull your ability will be."
"After your first meditative session, the more uses meditation has such as increasing you mental energy, to even evolving your power when you get enough mental energy. Mental energy can even be even used to increase your memory"
"Another thing you have to be wary of is getting distracted in your first meditation, if you lose focus your mental energy can go out of controll and the worst outcome of it happeningis leaving you comepletly brain dead."
"To an outsider point of view of someones mental energy going out of controllwill just look like a giant flash of a bright light followed by the peron having seizures."
"Sometimes very rare inividuals will be born with 2 powers however it comes with a price they will usaly have weaker powers for example someone who has 2 powers will have their mental energy split between the two. However there are exceptions."
As Lee was reading he happened to think back when his parants were killed. "When the demon vanished Isaw a bright flash of light could it be that, thatwas mymental energy?" Lee thought
However he shortly cleared this thought out of his head and went back to reading.
"Someone who doesn''t have a psychic ability will still have a small mental energy pool however mental energy can be used for things other than psychic abilitys for example someone can make their body stronger, dull someones perception of pain or even let someone think multiple things at once.If someone who didnt have psychic abilitys train their mental energy pool to a certain degree they can develop a psychic ability.It is even theorised that the origin of all psychic abilitys is from people training their mental energy"If you discover this tale on Amazon, be aware that it has been unlawfully taken from Royal Road. Please report it.
Lee closed the book "I think im about ready to start meditating." Lee thought to himself
He got up and went to the living room
"Grandma i''m ready."Lee said excitedly."Ok follow me."She said
She led him to a part of the house he''s never been to before. "When you meditate you lose your perception of your surroundings so do not freak out if you do, it can kick you out of the state."She warned
"Sit down."She said as she points to a mat on the floor.
Lee sat down and closed his eyes. At first he didnt notice anything however slowly he started to see a slight blue glow in the shapeof his body With a white ball of light in his forehead.
The whitelight was slowlypulsating and rotating. As he focused on the light he appered in a black room with a greenball of light floating in the air.
Slowly the light was expanding and moving erratically. After a few minutes the light was around the size of a car and still growing. As he focused on the ball of light he found out he could controll it if he focused, however he still couldn''t stop the ball of light from expanding.
"This must be my mental energy." Lee thought
No matter what he did he couldn''t keep the ball of light from expanding. After a few minutes the ball of light was about to completly cover the room.
I can''t controll it.Lee said
When all the sudden he felt a shap pain in his head, then ball of light started shrinking then all of the sudden exploded. "AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH." Lee screamed As his vision started fadingthe last thing he saw was single piece of paper and after that darkness.
Mary(Lees grandmother) POV
"Sit down." she said and shortly after lee closed his eyes and entered the state.
After about ten minutes shegot worried as it usally takes half the time to enter and leave the meditave state for the first time. All of a suddenthere was a flash of light then lee started spasming. "Not good he is having a seisure." she said as she ran up to him to check his vitals. "Good he''s safe." she saidto herself. She thenpicked him up and layed him down on the couch.As she stared at him she thout about a certain person
He realy does resemble him she thought nostalgically. As she thought abouther brother, the time when he awkened his power, to the time that he was betrayed..
"Those bastards." she growled as she thought about the people that her brother trusted.
She sighed there is nothing Ican do now. she thought trying to calm herself down.
"ughhh." She turned around hearing noise "He is starting to wake up." she thought to herself.
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Chapter 4 (Paper)
Chapter 3 (Meditation)
"Ughhh My heads on fire" he said after waking up "What happened?" Lee grabbed his head and tried to get up.
"Lay back down." Lees grandma said after putting some food on his bedside.
"Be glad you didn''t have any permanent damage done to your body." Mary said as she sat down on a couch the opposite of Lee.
"Can you tell me what happened when you entered your meditive state?" Lees grandmother asked him.
So Lee proceeded to tell her everything that happened.
Thats about it Lee said. "D-Did you say the last thing you saw was a piece of paper?" Lees grandmother asked excitedly.
"Thats right."Lee confirmed "Please show me your power so Ican be sure." "How do i do that" lee asked
"Its simple, all you do is enter youre meditative state again, however dont wory it isn''t dangerous anymore.""Why isnt it dangerous?" Lee asked curiosly "Well you see when you enter a meditave state for the first time you unlock your mental energy, the reason why its dangerous is because your mental energy is litterly destroying and recreating your mind over and over again to have an area to store your mental energy,thats the reason why its more dangerous, the more mental energy you have the more it has to recreate your brain."
"How do you know so much about psychic abilities Ithought you didn''t have a psychic ability?" Lee asked curiosly
"I said Iwasn''t born with an ability." She raised her hand and a smoldering ball of fire appeared out of knowhere on her hand. "Even if someone isn''t born with an ability they can still train their mental energy to develop one." She closed her hand and the flame disappeared. "Now back on to the subject of your power when you enter you meditive state you should see a ball of light and you the object your ability represents beside it.""When you enter this state you want to simply grabthe object and it should be brought back with you when you leavethe state."
Lee closed his eyes and entered his mental state. The first thing he saw was the familiar black room with a ball of light about the size of a basketball floating in the air. However beside it was a piece of Paper, with only a singleword written down on it.
"Skillswhat does that mean?" Lee thought "I can just ask grandma when i show her my power." Lee said as he grabbed the peice of paper.
He opened his eyes and he saw a piece of paper floating in the air. As he looked at his grandmother he saw she was in tears. "I-it realy is the same" she said wearingly."Whats wrong grandma" lee asked concerningly. "Im fine Lee." she said as she wiped her tears away. "What is my power and what does the skillsmean." Lee asked curiously.
"Your power is calledscientiakinesis.""It is the ability to manipulateknowledge, it is both the weakest power and the strongest power." "You can learncertain thingsmuch faster than ordinary people." "For example if it takes someone a year to learn a different language it would take you a month." "If you learn something to a point it will be labled on your power as a skill." "Skills get bonuses compared to it''s regular counterparts."If you find this story on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen. Please report the infringement.
"What keeps something from being labled as a skill?"Lee asked curiosly. "Diffuculty, for example you would learn a skill on quantum physics,however learning how to walk wouldn''t be a skill.""You can even learn psychic abilities if you know enough about them."
"However it comes with a risk,if you learn false informationabout the subject, it can hurt you or your ability."
"So Ican learn more than onepsychic ability."Lee asked curiously
"Yes, however it takes allot of time to learn different abilities."
"We should start you with a simple power, telekinesis."
She said as she started walking to a book shelf.
"Here is a book about your ancestor Russel Morris who had the ability of telekinesis." She said as she handed him a book that was in suprizingly good shape for its age. It had large red print on the front reading "Russel Morris - Telikinesis"
Lee opened it up and started reading
"Telekinesis is all about understanding the thing you are trying to move the more you understand about the material the easier it is to move. You need to understand the details about the object from the size of the object,to the material and even the weight, in order for you to move anything it helpsto understand the following things about the object "
1- (The weight)
2 - (The size)
3 - (The material)
4 - (The density)
5 - (The mass)
"The more complex an object is the harder it is to lift, for example you might have a harder time moving a phone compaired to a spoon"
"Telekinesis isn''t just about moving objects with your mind, it is also about forming a cloud with you mental energy, the more of an area you form, the longer the range you can move an object. Weight is also a factor in the equation the heavier an object is the more energy it takes."
Lee closed his book and checked his ability.
Skills
In Progress
telekinesis (2%)
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"Its already at 2%." he said suprised. He continued reading about telekinesis for hours and hours until it was night.
{knock knock knock}
Lee shut the book and opened his door."Did you not stop reading atall?"She asked him. "I was too enthralled in the book." He said with a weary smile. "How far did you proggress." She asked him curiosly. "I don''t know let me check." He said curiously.
Skills
In Progress
telekinesis (20%)
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I"m already at 20%."Lee said excitedly. Not bad, not bad at all, within a few days it should evolve into minor telekinesis.
After talking for a while she warned him "You should really get some rest, you just enteredyour first meditative state it realy puts a strain on your mind." She warned him
"What about school?" Lee asked curiosly. "From now on your home schooled, wewill start next week for now just try to finish learning about telekinesis." She said with a smile.
"Okay goodnight grandma." Lee said "Goodnight honey." She said as she shut the door.
Chapter 5 (telekinesis)
Chapter 5 (telekinesis)
1 week later
Skills
In Progress
telekinesis (99%)
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"I still can''t seem to be able to break through."Lee said as he clicked his tongue. "I wonder why it won''t let me advance."Lee said. However he soon shook the thought out of his head and went back to reading.
A few minutes later his grandmother walked in.
"How is you telekinesis progressing?"Lees grandmother asked. "Not good."Lee said as he sighed. "I''ve been stuck at 99% for a few days now." Lee said."Follow me." Lees grandmother said as she walked out of the library.
Before Itell you about how to progress further you have to promise me something. Lees grandmother said with a strict tone W-what? Lee asked slightly worried. Never, EVERuse your abilities on people."she said with a strict tone. "Okay grandma Iwill never use my abilities on people." Lee said with a determined expression"Okay honey she said as she went back to a relaxed tone.""Let me explain about how to progress further in your ability." She said as she switched back to her usual self.
"The problem your having is that you have only been gathering informationabout telekinesis, however you still have no idea how to form the ability."She said as she led Lee to the basement of the house."The thing about your ability to learn abilitiesis that it goes through three phases."
"The first phase is the acquisitionof the power." "All you need for this phase is to understand what telikinesis is."
"The second phase is the acquisitionof information about the power." "For telekinesis its learning facts about it."
"However the third phaseis the hardest and most dangerous phase." "It is when you try to put the information in to use.""Forthe third phase you have to try to form the psychicobject with your power, to do that you have to go into your meditive state."
"The first thingyou will see is a object half formed in your conciosness." "Grab the object and it will scan your mind for the information about the power."
"If you have enough information on the power you will form it, however if you dont have enough information it will destroy the power and it will have a possibility to destroy your original power." "So be careful when you try to form anability."
She said as she pointed to a mat on the ground. "Now, try to enter your meditave state and tell me what you see." She said as she sat down on a couch to the oppposite of Lee.
Lee closed his eyes and entered his consciousness. He looked around for the object, then he saw it, a spoon floating in the air however, the spoon wasn''tcompletely visible.
Lee opened his eyes and looked at his grandma "So what did you see?" Lees grandmother asked him. Lee proceeded to tell her everything he saw. "You should be ready to form it." lees grandmother saidUnauthorized duplication: this narrative has been taken without consent. Report sightings.
Lee sat back down and entered the state again, as he entered his conciosness he walked up to to floating spoon and graabbed it. When he did he felt something like an electric shock throughout his whole body.
He felt a ripping pain in his mind. Lee grit his teeth and tried to bear with it, the spoon slowly formed. At first it was barely visible however soon it was as visible as glass. As the spoon formedthe more pain he felt in his mind. However after what felt like hours the spoon finally formed.
The pain in his mind finaly stopped, and there was a flash of light. Lee was kicked out of his conciesness. As he opened his eyes he felt different he knew were everything was around him in a small area. As he focused onhis ability he found out he could stretch the cloud of energy around him. The farthest he could stretch it was about three meters however it took all he could to do that.
"Check your ability." Lees grandmother said with a smile. Lee did as she said.
Skills
Minortelekinesis (0%)
In Progress
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"I have Minor telekinesis." Lee said as she smiled. "How do i make any more progress on the skill?"Lee asked curiosly.
"In order for you to make any progressyou will have to practise the skill over and over again, however the progress will slow considerbly.""I believe it should take you a few months to make any significant progress in it." She said with a weary smile."Il take you to the training room follow me." She said as she grabbed his hand.
"What should Ido now?" Lee asked curiosly."Do you know why Igot you homeschooled?" Lees grandmother asked "Wasn''tit so i could train my psychic abilities?"
"You are partially correct, the other reason why you are home schooled is because with your ability you will learn things allot faster compaired to other people." "In fact when your mental energy increases you will learn things even faster." she said as she brought him to a room that looked like a training ground of some sort.
"Here is where you will test your abilities." She said as she brought him to an area with target dummies.
"All you have to do is throw the rocks at the dummies with your telekinesis." "Simple right however the dummys are outside theyour reach of your telekinesis. "
"So how do Ihit them?" Lee asked curiosly. "You just have to throw them." "Why dont you give it a try." she said as she pointedat the rock. "Sure." Lee said with an eager tone.
As he tried to gather the mental energy around the rock he noticed that he can use his mental energy to examine objects."The rock''s weight is about 8 ounces."Lee said to himself.As he lifted up the rock it soon fell back down.
"You didn''t gather enough mental energy" Lees grandmother told him. So lee tried it again however this time {CRUNCH} the rock crumbled to peices.
"This time you gathered to much, you have to find the balance of mental energy." "The heavier the object is the more energy it takes, it shoudnt take to much energy to lift the rock."
So Lee tried again this time he tried to find a balance."I-it worked!" Lee said excited however, he soon hefelt his mental energy disperse and looked up and saw that the rock was falling. What happened? Lee asked confused"You stopped controlling your mental energy, of course it is going to fall, now try to shootthe rock at the target."
Lee lifted the rock and shot it at the target, however he missed. "I forgot about the weight." Lee thought to himself and tried again, he hit the target the second time.
He went and checked on his ability.
Skills
Minortelekinesis (0.2%)
In Progress
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"Only zero point two percent."Lee sighed. "I told you that the progress whould stall." Lees grandmother said "For now, you should focus on school work Ihave some books about math,history,english,and mathmaticsbooks in the library."
"For now just work on your school work and train your telekinesis.""When your minor telekinesis reaches 95%come see me." Lees grandmother said as she walked out of the training room.
Chapter 6 (Evolution)
Chapter 6(Evolution)
1 Year later
Sitting in a library alone is a kid around 12 years old with brown hair and green eyes, however where most kids of his age would just start learning algebra, he is reading books on advanced mathmatics.
"Im finaly done." Lee thought to himself as he shut the book. He walkedout of the room to the living room."Grandma im done for today".
"Come over here and sit down." Lees grandmother said. "Grandma you said today you wanted toteach me something." Lee said curiosly.
"How far have you progressed on your telekinesis?" Lees grandmother asked him. "Let me check."
Skills
Minortelekinesis (95.6%)
In Progress
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"Im at 95%." lee said with a smile
"That should be far enough for me to teach you." Lees grandmother said. "Im going to teach you how to cook." Lee was about to ask something however shesoon interrupted him "The reason why im teaching you how to cook is because whenever you learn a new skill your mental energy increases significantly."
"Why cooking particularly." Lee asked "Because cooking is something that doesnt take long to form a skill." "It should only take you a day to learn the basics of the basics."
"Another reasonis because I want to eat something other than fast food." Lees grandmother thought to herself with a grin on her face.
"I understand that, but why did Ihave to wait for my telekinesis to get strong enough for me to learn how to cook?" Lee asked curiosly.
"If you focus on too many things will you ever get realy accomplished in any of them?" she said "If Itaught a new skillright after you learned telekinesis would it still be at 95%?" She said. "Now that you have one skillin the lead you can now learn new skills.""For now you just need to focus on learnings the basics Ican teach you that part, however the rest you will have to learn yourself."
For the rest of the day she proceeded to teach him about cooking.
Skills
Minortelekinesis (95.6%)
Minor Cooking (0.1%)
In Progress
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"I got the skill."Lee said with a smille "Check on your mental energy in your consciousness" Lees grand mother said As lee closed his eyes and entered his consciousness he noticed his mental energy has turned a dark blue color and was about as twice as smallas it was before.
"Why is my mental energy a different color?" he asked his grandmother. "Thats because yor mental energy got denser." "You will also get mental energy when a skill levels up."
"You should be able to level up your cooking skill at the same time as your telekinesis ability." "After they both level up Iwill teach you a new ability." Lees grandmother said
"What power are you going to teach me?" Lee asked with an excitedtone. "Be patient I will tell you when level up both of your skills." She said trying to calm Lee down
"For now you should get some rest.""Okay grandma goodnight." "Goodnight honey." she said as she went to her room.
1 Week Later
Skills
Minortelekinesis (99%)Taken from Royal Road, this narrative should be reported if found on Amazon.
Cooking (0%)
In Progress
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"It realy is unfair the time differance it takes to level a regular skill compaired to a psychic ability." ... "Well Ishould be able to level up my telekinesis after a few hours of training." He said to himselfas he tried to cheer himself up.
"I wonder what will happen when Ilevel up my telekinisis?" Lee thought to himself as he headed to the training room. After a few hours in the middle of his training he heard a loud ding sound followed by a bright flash of light.
"What''s happening?!" Lee yelled All of the sudden he was forced into his consciousness. As he looked at his telekinesis ability he noticed it was rapidly disintegrating. "No, no no!" he yelled as he stried to keep his ability from rapidly disintegrating. However no matter what he did he couldnt keep it from disappearing.
As he watched it rapidly disappearing he thought to himself "All my hard work ive got to do something!""With only a small slither of the ability remaining. He remembered the time when he first formed it. So he did the only thing he could think of to run up to the power and grab it.
Right after he heard a loud explosion. His vision starting fading, and he was kicked out of his consciousness. However he was in different place than before. He was layingin his bed. When his grandmother walked in. "Grandma what happened?" Lee asked her with a confused expression.
"Why dont you tell me." "You have been unconsciousfor a week, you were in the training room when you passed out." She said with a worried expression
"I was at the last step of leveling up my telekinesis, there was loud ding sound then there was a large flash of light." "I was then forced into my consciousness where Isaw my telekinesis ability was rapidly disintegrating."
"The last thing that happened was that Irushed towards my ability and grabbed it, then Iheard a loud explosion and Iwas forced out of my consciousness." Lee explained.
"Your telekinesis wasn''t disintegrating, it was evolving your ability. In order for it toupgrade, your ability has to be destroyed then formed again."
"What you did however by panicking about your telekinesis ability you forced yourscientiakinesis abilty to evolve." "You are very lucky that you didn''t destroy your ability or even worse killed yourself." She said with a strict tone
"S-so Ididn''t lose any of my abilities." Lee said with a conserned voice."No, in fact you even improved your original ability.""Dont ever try to force your ability to evole, if you ever try to again im not going to teach you anything else about your abilities." She said with a tone that said that she wasnt joking.
"So how did my ability change?"Lee asked his grandmother "How am Isupposed to know, everyones ability is different when they evolve, you have to check and see what changed."She said with a smile
Lee opened up his ability.
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Lee felt a sharp pain in his head,however it was still bearable.
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| NAME |
Lee Morris |
Ability |
scientiakinesis MRK 2 |
| Mental Energy |
0/200 |
Stamina |
85/150 |
| Intellingence |
13 |
Strength |
8 |
| Wisdom |
12 |
Defence |
8 |
| Agility |
8 |
Dexterity |
11 |
SKILLS
Telekinesis (0%)
Cooking (0%)
Minor Mental Energy Manipulation (21%)
In Progress
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"I wish Iknew what all thenumbers mean." Lee thought to himself, when all of a sudden a screen appeared in front of him.
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Here is an explanation of the following stats.
MENTAL ENERGY - This determines how much you are able to use your power If incresed you can even think multiple things at once.This stat is 10 on an average person.
STAMINA - Determines how much physical and mental activity you can endure. This stat is 100 on an average person.
STR - This stat showshow strong the body is. This stat is 10 on an average person.
INT - This stat shows how smart you are and determines how much Mental energy you have. This stat is 10 on an average person.
WIS - This stat determines how you are able to deal with situations.It also factores in your mental energy regeneration. This stat is 10 on an average person.
DEF- This stat determines how tough your body is. It also determines how fast you heal, and how fast you regenerate stamina. This stat is 10 on an average person.
AGI - Determines how fast you are able to move. This stat is 10 on an average person.
DEX - Determines how fast your reaction speed and eyesight is. This stat is 10 on an average person.
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Chapter 7 (New Power)
Chapter 7(New Power)
"So how did your ability evolve?" Lees grandmother asked curiosly "Here why dont you see" He said as he showed her his ability.
| NAME |
Lee Morris |
Ability |
scientiakinesis MRK 2 |
| Mental Energy |
0/200 |
Stamina |
85/150 |
| Intellingence |
13 |
Strength |
8 |
| Wisdom |
12 |
Defence |
8 |
| Agility |
8 |
Dexterity |
11 |
SKILLS
Telekinesis (0%)
Cooking (0%)
Minor Mental Energy Manipulation (21%)
In Progress
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"So your ability allowed you to view the status of your mental and physical abilities.""Your physical abilities are lower compaired to a normal person, however Iguess thats normal." She said with a smile. "Why is it normal?" Lee asked curiosly "Its simple its because you arent fully grown." "Compair a childs punch to a grown mans and you will see a big differance."
"Then whyis my dexterity higher compaired to a normal person?" Lee asked curiosly "Its because of your cooking skill." "When you cook you have to pay attention to everything that you are doing, of course your reaction speed would increase."
"Why do i have a new skill?"Lee asked curiosly "Mayby its because your ability viewedmore things as skills when it evolved?" She said unsure of herself.
"Is the reason there is a mrk 2 next to my ability because it evolved once?" Lee asked"Thats right.""By the way, why is my mental energy 0?" Lee asked with a worried expression. "Its probably a side effect of forcing your ability to evolve, it should recover after a few weeks.""Is there any way to make it recover faster?" Lee asked.
"Just be glad with escaping with your life, someone else in that position might not have been as lucky." She said slightly annoyed. "But-" However before he could say anything his grandmother interupted him. "But nothing, its not healthy to constantly work all the time." She said with a serious expression."Why are you working so hard?" Lees grandmother asked worriedly
"Its because -" However he stopped mid sentence "Its because Idont want anything like what happened to my parrants to happen again.""I dont want to feel powerless, to feel like Ican''t do anything." Lee said with a sad expression
"You need to rest or else you wont make any progress in anything you do."shesaid with a concerned expression.
"Why dont you watch some movies or read some books,you realy need to get some rest."
"Il try grandma." Lee said with a downcast smile
3 Months later
| NAME |
Lee Morris |
Ability |
scientiakinesis MRK 2 |
| Mental Energy |
220/220 |
Stamina |
150/150 |
| Intellingence |
13 |
Strength |
8 |
| Wisdom |
12 |
Defence |
8 |
| Agility |
8 |
Dexterity |
11 |
"My mental energy has finaly recovered!" Lee thought to himself excitedly. Lee rushed to his grandmothers room and opened the door. "My mental energy had finaly recovered." Lee said to his grandmother.
"Could you show me your status?" Lees grandmother asked curiosly "Sure."Lee said as he showed her his staus.
| NAME |
Lee Morris |
Ability |
scientiakinesis MRK 2 |
| Mental Energy |
200/220 |
Stamina |
149/150 |
| Intellingence |
13 |
Strength |
8 |
| Wisdom |
12 |
Defence |
8 |
| Agility |
8 |
Dexterity |
11 |
SKILLSIf you encounter this story on Amazon, note that it''s taken without permission from the author. Report it.
Telekinesis (0%)
Cooking (28%)
Minor Mental Energy Manipulation (21%)
In Progress
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Your mental energy incresed. She said "Why did it increase though, Ididnt use my mental energy at all during the last 3 months?""Its because you took a break your mental energy had time to recover fully.""From now on you need to rest from time to time you cant constantly work all the time."
"Okay grandma." Lee said "Since your mental energy has recovered you canlearn a new power however im going to give you a choice." "You canlearn one of the following five powers."
Pyrokinesis - The ability to controll and create fire. This ability also makes the person resistant to heatto a highdegree. You are able to manipulate the temperture of objects and living beings if trained to a proficient enough level.
Hydrokinesis - The ability to controll and create water. If you are proficient enough you can slightly controll people with the blood in their body, however this ability only lasts for a few seconds.
Aerokinesis - The ability to controll and create air. Can be used to controll the weather if proficient enough.
Geokinesis - The ability to controll and manipulate the earth. Makes the users body stronger and tougher.
Electrokinesis - The ability to controll and create lightning. People having this ability usally have the ability to fuse the electricity with their body making there reflexes faster and are able to move faster.
"Why are all of the abilities based on the elements?" Lee asked curiosly. "Its because its harder to form your mental energy to another energyall together." "It will make your controll of mental energy be on an completly different level."
"So which ability do you want to learn?"She asked"Electrokinesis." Lee said after a few minutes."Why electrokinesis?" Lees grandmother asked curiosly "Its because it seems allot more usefullcompaired to the other abilities." Lee said
"Your correct however forming this ability is allot more dangerous compaired to the other abilities." "Its not like your telekinesis ability, were you just have to read about it to form the ability.""To form electrokinesis you have to form electricity with your mental energyhowever you dont have controll overit and you arenot resistant to it."
"It is incredibly dangerous, are you sure you want to train it?" She said concerned. "Im sure!" Lee said with determination showing in his eyes. Seeing her grandson so determined she sighed to herself "I wont stop you however Ihave to be there when you train the ability." "If anything goes wrong Iwont let you train the ability anymore."
"Since you chose that ability im going to have to make some renovations to the house for you to be able to train it." She said with a weary smile "For now however just train your telekinesis ability." "It should take about 2 weeks to make the renovations."
2 Weeks Later
| NAME |
Lee Morris |
Ability |
scientiakinesis MRK 2 |
| Mental Energy |
230/230 |
Stamina |
155/155 |
| Intellingence |
13 |
Strength |
8 |
| Wisdom |
12 |
Defence |
8 |
| Agility |
8 |
Dexterity |
11 |
SKILLS
Telekinesis (6%)
Cooking (34%)
Minor Mental Energy Manipulation (23%)
In Progress
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"Follow me." Lees grandmother said as she walked into Lees room "Is itfinally done?" Lee askedexcitedly Shedidnt answershe just smiled and said "Follow me."
As she led him into a dark room she turned on a dim light. In the middle of the room was a thick glass wall and a door made of rubber, with a rubber border surrounding the wall.
"Why is it so dark?" Lee asked confused "You are able toform thisability by knowing the essence of electricity.""This also includes the light electricity gives off." She said
"Follow me." she said as she walked through the door. On the other side of the room ther was a mat on the ground. This is where you will practise your ability. "I will be on the other side of the wall, if any thing goes wrong." she said
"How do Iform the ability?" Lee asked "You need to think aboutelectricityand move your mental energy according to your imagination.""Over time your mental energy will start to look more like electricity."
"If you lose focus for even a second the energy will go out of controll and act like electricity.""I will ask again are you sure you want to form this ability?" She asked conserned "I''m sure grandma." Lee said with determination. "I know I cant stop you, however be carefull, if you ever feel yourself loosing focus direct your mental energy towards the glass wall." She said with consern in her voice.
Lee sat down and started trying to form what he dubbed lightning energy. At first the only thing he saw was a few sparks. However over time there was flashes of light and the energy was moving more and more erraticly.
The energy was moving around the room at a fast speed and there was a flash of blue light wherever it went, and he felt that it was getting harder to controll. Soon he lost controll over it and the lightning zapped him.
Not a chapter (Rewrite?)
When Iwas writing this story Iwanted to start outwith the main character growing up pretty fast however as Iwas writing Idrew more and more out of focus for my original idea I also got to caught up in the main character''s power and should of wrote what happened more clearly.
For example Iwanted to focus more on liz as an important character however Isoon got distracted and scratched that idea.I also feel like Istarted out the main character training his ability too early.Unauthorized content usage: if you discover this narrative on Amazon, report the violation.
Ididnt have much fun writing the recent chapters and it defintly shows as they are the worst chapters so far. I found my self wanting to go ahead and skip over the growing up phases and get to my original idea
Anyway the main pont im trying to make is do you want me to rewrite the early chapters or just continue to write more chapters