Introduction: Hello everyone!I'm currently writing my first book, and it's still in the very early stages. My plan is to upload the first chapter on Royal Road, and I would love to get as much feedback as possible.I'm looking for constructive criticism on any mistakes or flaws in my writing, as well as suggestions to improve the story. If you have any ideas that could help enhance the plot or characters, I鈥檇 really appreciate hearing them.Any feedback, whether about pacing, worldbuilding, or storytelling in general, would be incredibly valuable. Thanks in advance for your help!...