Jord's troubled life
The story follows Jord Whittaker, a man hollowed by the material circumstances he's born into. He finds himself trusted into a precarious position. A position where he must carefully tread between spite and pride.And when the walls between worlds collapse, what will remain of the man beneath the uniform?It's my first story and so I expect there to be issues, be it on grammar or plot points; Criticism highly appreciated.LitRPG elements will emerge later in the story, It will be light and have deep implications for the material conditions of the new epoch.Updates are on T and F.
Introduction:
The story follows Jord Whittaker, a man hollowed by the material circumstances he's born into. He finds himself trusted into a precarious position. A position where he must carefully tread between spite and pride.And when the walls between worlds collapse, what will remain of the man beneath the uniform?It's my first story and so I expect there to be issues, be it on grammar or plot points; Criticism highly appreciated.LitRPG elements will emerge later in the story, It will be light and have deep implications for the material conditions of the new epoch.Updates are on T and F....
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