After getting injured on a hostage rescue mission, ex-mercenary Jonathan Nobel is recruited to be the face of a new interactive total immersion VR game; Immersion Online. With no special privileges beyond those of an average player, he must navigate the trials of this digital realm while his experiences are distilled into a web series that serves to promote the game. However, Jonathan will discover that being a celebrity in a virtual fantasy world isn't as glamourous as it's made out to be, particularly when he is out of his element and grappling with his own demons.----------------------What to expect from the story:- A dash of realism in an unrealistic world- Somewhat strong lead, but not overpowered- Technology instead of magicI aim for 2000 words per chapter with two chapters released per week, and have the first 40 chapters prewritten chapters released a bit sporadically, unfortunately. As the roadmap stands right now, I believe the whole story will be 3 books encompassing somewhere around 120-150 chapters in total.This is my first shared story, so I appreciate any feedback - good or bad.
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After getting injured on a hostage rescue mission, ex-mercenary Jonathan Nobel is recruited to be the face of a new interactive total immersion VR game; Immersion Online. With no special privileges beyond those of an average player, he must navigate the trials of this digital realm while his experiences are distilled into a web series that serves to promote the game. However, Jonathan will discover that being a celebrity in a virtual fantasy world isn't as glamourous as it's made out to be, particularly when he is out of his element and grappling with his own demons.----------------------What to expect from the story:- A dash of realism in an unrealistic world- Somewhat strong lead, but not overpowered- Technology instead of magicI aim for 2000 words per chapter with two chapters released per week, and have the first 40 chapters prewritten chapters released a bit sporadically, unfortunately. As the roadmap stands right now, I believe the whole story will be 3 books encompassing somewhere around 120-150 chapters in total.This is my first shared story, so I appreciate any feedback - good or bad....
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