Hey everybody! Im finally beginning on a full rewrite of the story, what I''ve written until now was both a test to see if it got enough interest, and an learning experience for me since this is my first time writing ever. Ive gotten a-lot of help from experienced writers and I think its time to really start turning this work into a book worth reading. From now on I,ll restart from chapter one while rewriting the story! Thanks for everyone,s feedback and help up till now! Thanks to everyone I''ve been able to improve a-lot and figure out everything i need to really start writing a quality story. See you all when I release chapter 1!If you encounter this tale on Amazon, note that it''s taken without the author''s consent. Report it.


    (Dont worry, the story wont be something totally different, much of what happens will stay the same, except hopefully a-lot better)