first things first this poll is only about chapters one through three and the prologue.


    what i want to know is how you experience my text or to be more exact my:


    sentence building and grammar


    does the text sound forced or juvenile.


    do you think i have any writing disabilities from reading my texts


    is the punctuation good


    word choice


    Is the text hard to read or understand


    Is the structure ok paragraphs etc


    how do you like the length of my chapters right now my chapters have been around a thousand


    words each except the prologue should i aim to decrease the amount of chapters in favor of longer ones


    or just continue releasing chapters as is and not bother with the length. since now I am just writing and


    when i get to a point where I am either to tired to continue or just don''t have any more ideas for the moment


    and the text looks reasonable I just release it ( after some grunt work of course editing removing unnecessary words


    restructuring sentences and fixing spelling and grammar(which i missed in the prologue thanks again for pointing it out  AnalEvaporator)).


    Unauthorized use of content: if you find this story on Amazon, report the violation.


    if you think I am worthy of your time and a bit of feedback feel free to answer these questions


    almost any criticism is appreciated good or bad as long as it is constructive.


    and now for some information about the future


    and since I don''t really know if this will spoil it for some people.


    <b>Spoiler</b> : <input type=''button'' value=''Show'' class=''spoilerButton''>the next few chapters I think Vivo will stay in town so nothing really exciting will happen


    nothing planed for that at-least but the story must somewhat dictate itself imo.


    the reason behind this is because I want some more character development and


    to develop the world around him


    and feel free to point out any spelling mistakes i do so i can correct them.