Childhood Arc:
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Chapter 1: UPLOADED
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SS - Valentine Contest Story: UPLOADED
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Training Arc:
Prologue: Writing (150%) Editor (0%) Proofread (0%)
Kiryun Arc:
So it has come to my attention a few weeks ago, that my story has severe problems. Mainly that there is a lack of a plot or goal and even feeling in my characters. So I will be taking the next few weeks to go over and rewrite the story. Some things that I expect to change is...
Childhood/Training arc:<ul>
<li>Since I wrote that Michael''s family lives in a big house, I feel that there''s a need to have some maids. Mainly to take care of the house. Only 3 but they will be making some casual appearances in the story.</li>
<li>Michael needs more scenes so I''ll be writing about his interactions more. Especially with Liera.</li>
<li>Removing the Time Skip and actually writing about the training. This means I will be giving him new stats as well.</li>
<li>More information about the continent of Gaia. I was about to write about nobles in Chapter 18 but it was incredibly awkward and I think it would be better to put all the information I need into the Childhood arc and Side Stories.</li>
<li>Introducing a new cast of SS characters. Players whose names I have taken from chat. Only in the last SS of the arc.</li>
Love this story? Find the genuine version on the author''s preferred platform and support their work!<li>Better curse. People don''t like the halved stats so I''ll be changing it a bit.</li>
<li>Michael will be going through some internal problems as well. Well, more mental than internal bodily problems.
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Travel and Kiryun Arc:<ul>
<li>So a big problem about this arc was the various descriptions I give out and the lack of action. I will move most of the descriptions to either the childhood arc or to SS.</li>
<li>Actions. I will be describing fights in greater detail.</li>
<li>Liera. She and Michael will be talking alot more. She will get more screen time as well.</li>
<li>Jemma. Some scenes from her POV will be added.</li>
<li>Lerisa. More of an antagonistic role in the story. Like that gag villain. More backstory too.
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Questions and concerns and even some suggestions? Please comment below or email.
Also review my fic so I can see what the problem is. AND RATE!!! This has been a blatant advertisement from Argos. Even though I''ll ask for a score reset later >.>
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