Hey everyone! Nkight here. So I managed to crank out 5 chapters in about 3 days. So far I''m greatly encouraged by all your positive comments. There''s only one problem, I''ve not received any answers to my requests.


    Seeing as I have 5 chapters out, I would like to create a thread to answer some confusions that have turned up so far. If anything I''ve wrote so far has confused you, please reply and post your questions down below.


    I''m still looking for any criticisms that you may have. I would like to improve on my writing more. Please please please, don''t be afraid to say tell me what I''m doing badly, and what I need to improve on.


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    What do you think I need to write more about: Yuki''s relationships, more about Yuki''s reality, more about the world of SSO, etc. Right now I''m gonna start on Yuki''s Training arc, the first 5 chapters were more of a prologue than actual content. So feel free to post what you think on this thread.


    Thank you very much for reading my story.