Ok people I will be rewriting the chapters I have written up till now because I am not satisfied with the quality (at all).


    The terrible writing before is stopping me from continuing the story in an interesting way so that is why I want to do it over again.


    I will keep the general plot line the same although the pacing might be different .


    Unauthorized usage: this tale is on Amazon without the author''s consent. Report any sightings.For the rest only the plot line is going to stay the same (including characters although they might seem different because I couldn''t express them all that well before)


    In a moment I will post the prologue (short prologue the rest of the previous prologue will be in chapter 1) here.