Long story short I''m extremely unsatisfied with the story as it is, even with all the revisions I made. So I''m ending this here, maybe, just maybe I''ll pick it up from scratch again but I wouldn''t hold your breath.


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    On the bright side, I''m thinking of starting another (different) story and I intend to do a better job with it. More planning, more details and a better lain plot.