Author:
I have read all you comment, you all had a different expectations from this story...
In truth, I once wrote it where he had been reincarnated as a girl instead a boy... But, it made it more difficult to continue the storyline.
Zenlocke:
Eh... You really did that?!
Author:
Yeah.. There a part where I made you as prodigy, good in both as a knight and a magician...
Then there I had another problem, my cousin who I had her first read it and commented that he is too OP, and less non-OP...
Zenlocke:
Hmm.. That would be awesome... But I still don''t plan to be in the center stage.
Author:
Another were I had you in a same situation just like in your previous life, were you had brother as a prodigy... And somehow turned you into a dark MC...
Zenlocke:
... I won''t be like that!.. (probably)
Author:
I didn''t let dinfar have a scene, and he supposed to be antagonist in it, it was a scene where you came to greet... Olivia tried to get a favor from the twin but you anticipated it and evaded all her... "Hooks"... And gave up in the end...
There the two, you and Dinfar, would first meet and request a spar to humiliate you, Zenlocke, from all the rumor that he have heard... From this storyline, he almost killed Dinfar, the next heir... And have a hostile relationship... And change it to a new storyline...
Zenlocke:
Now that nasty, I can already picture it happening... We did a practice about that scene and it was terrifying, I could sense Zyn''s terrifying intent... *Goosebumps*
Author:
There is also a part where I had you, rescue a girl from a crowd of monster when the village were in high alert.. I had all of it remove to a different timeline...
A case of content theft: this narrative is not rightfully on Amazon; if you spot it, report the violation.
Zenlocke:
Dude, you just want me to get killed by a certain someone, aren''t you...
Author:
Although I already have planned the scenes... I could still move it to a different timeline...
Zenlocke:
Really? That''s good... I''m not gonna get killed!
Author:
Good for you... But I would still had you have a son/daughther very soon..
Zyneste:
Dear brother, what is he talking about. *Emitting a Dark Aura*
Zenlocke:
Nothing, he just said a silly talk about me having a child. *Ignoring*
Zyneste:
Wha-wawa... *Steaming red* (I''m gonna have a...) hehehehe...
Zenlocke:
??
Author:
Gonna go back to writing... Bye! *Dash away*
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May be slow but I will try to get your expectations.
By the way... I need a new character name... Could you recommend, a commoner, adventurer, noble, royal.
Example:
(Full name, Gender, Social Class)
Olivia Nerus, F, Noble
While you''re at it, throw some of your idea as well and I would try to squeeze it in... Although some might not be use...
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I had few different stories ... Just ask.. I had a Sci-fi VRMMORPG, a exiled prince in vendetta, Zombie Apocalypse, State invasion, crossover to a different world, a mercenary high school, trapped in a Modern war VRMMO, and etc. Can''t pick either so I a new one hoped you keep following.
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