This thread is meant for readers to get some input in.


    Questions, spoilers and such things in this thread.


    If you, the reader, have ideas you wish to share, or scenes you''d like to see incorporated, please post here.


    If you have certain gripes, either story, vocabulary or grammar, let me know.


    The best way to improve this story is by letting me know which parts work and which need fixing.


    As mentioned in one of the chapters, I am currently looking for editors, proofreaders and people to bounce ideas off of in general, so, you can apply for a position here.


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    Hoping for a lively discussion!


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    Added a poll for the Fairy''s name, everyone gets three votes, the most popular name shall be chosen. Please no ''Joke Votes''


    If you have a name you think would make a great addition, vote other, and add the name in this thread