I must be honest with myself and you guys.


    I started this story full of vigor and creative juice. Yet somewhere along the way I lost my way, I tried to take what should''ve been a lighthearted story due to the VR angle and inject it with greater tension than the premise could support. I have realized that the story I''m writing simply can''t ever become the story I want it to be, and for that reason I have to end it.


    The narrative has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the infringement.I know I promised a proper end, and if you feel there are to many loose ends do let me know and I will at least tie those up.


    I am sorry for the way I have ended this. I should have let you guys know long before now.


    I hope that when I do post a new story on this site you readers wont hold this whole thing against me.


    With sincere apologies


    BurningBookworm