I edited Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 a bit, so feel free to check it out if you want. I didn''t change any plot, I just added a few more thoughts and details. This only applies to those who read the Chapters on 1/24/2016 Pacific Time.


    The narrative has been illicitly obtained; should you discover it on Amazon, report the violation.


    Other than that, if you have any thoughts feel free to comment. I may not be a writer, but I''m trying to improve my writing skills and have fun.