Calling out to all the fans of silks and ash. I would like some help when I write I sort of get tunnel vision, I know what I want to happen and I know how I want the story to go so I focus on the Mc more than the side characters and as a result my story seems hallow even to my self. A reader pointed out to me this and gave inspiration for the latest chapter but even that chapter had a bit of tunnel vision. The readers name was Zekean so I would like other readers to point out things and help me move the story along. An author on this site once wrote a  book is a conversation between the writer and the reader. I agree fully with this  but it takes more than one to have a conversation so come talk to me. Tell me everything you find wrong with the story anything you would like to see.