Hi, I''m a fledgling writer, and this is my first real attempt at writing a story.


    I''ve read many many stories on this site but I know being a reader doesn''t make you a good writer. That said constructive criticism is welcome with open arms.


    Now let''s talk about expectations! Don''t expect perfection and I''ll do my best to live up to yours. That''s all folks now on to the story!!!


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    Fuck that was bright!!! Man a small part of a sun disintegrating you is no joke. But keeping my eyes open until the last second to see the shock and fear on that demons face was so worth the pain!  He was caught completely off guard.


    Now enough stalling and distracting myself I need to face those annoying notification screens


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    ''Welcome to The Halls Of Heaven


    New God Identified Please State The Name You Wish To Be Known


    Careful of your choice this is what you followers will know you as!


    Hmmmmmmm something really cool? Or something to help my reputation like ''The Bright One'' or  something ''of The Light''? How about we go with ...