This is literally the first story I''ve ever written and it is supposed to be a test to myself of how well I can do, I am not sorry about how the story is turning out as I am doing my best. I will not stop writing till the very ending I assure you of that and I am very thankful to those in the comments pointing things out for me.Once the story is complete I will either go through it again and rewrite as some have suggested, or write a new story completely. That has yet to be decided. Again thank you all for reading and commenting :).