Introduction: Driven out by his fellow Council Members of the Hat'ztsi Caste, He felt desolate and powerful.War is coming, and no sides offer advantages towards disadvantages on the world of Jamin Karr.Cast down from his seat of power in the Council, Archangel Of Balance Ultihmuz, commonly referred to as the Balance Keeper. Can he force the war to his whims, or will he strike back at the masses for all he has bled for? 18+ For Heavy Violence and Profanity. ____________________________________________________________________________________ Looking for constructive criticism, first novel.Art goes to Diablo III artists. If wanted to be taken down, i will oblige.Break down my story, destroy it and rebuild it. I want to feel the full blunt of the force to help me improve....