Due to JumpyAf''s comments I am currently debating whether I should rewrite this story. The poll above won''t be the final decision but it will influence my opinion quite a bit.


    EDIT: If possible I would like you to state reasons, which would influence my opinion far more than a simple vote.


    Royal Road is the home of this novel. Visit there to read the original and support the author.


    EDIT: I won''t rewrite this fiction. In the end the 1st person is more fitting for this story so I will continue like this.