Strike me in anger,Scream at me in hate,I will take it because that is my fate. For I was born in coldness and in warmth, born to a family from the North,I was born into a family just as they appear, then I became the one to fear,I was born in a place that was torn, born into a family filled with scorn,I was born to a family forever gone, born to be nothing more than a pawn,I was born to be sold, born so my family could get more gold,I was born to a world that has no strife, yet born to never have a life. So how do I tell you of the things that I know?How do I make you see?That you and I are not so different from each other,The only difference is that you are you and I am鈥?i everyone, this is my first time writing a novel, so let me know what you think. I'd appreciate all your feedback on how to make this work better. Also, the chapters I will be posting will be first drafts, so semi-rough editing and proofing. I will usually post on weekends (Saturday and/orSunday), but sometimes I will post during the week.
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Strike me in anger,Scream at me in hate,I will take it because that is my fate. For I was born in coldness and in warmth, born to a family from the North,I was born into a family just as they appear, then I became the one to fear,I was born in a place that was torn, born into a family filled with scorn,I was born to a family forever gone, born to be nothing more than a pawn,I was born to be sold, born so my family could get more gold,I was born to a world that has no strife, yet born to never have a life. So how do I tell you of the things that I know?How do I make you see?That you and I are not so different from each other,The only difference is that you are you and I am鈥?i everyone, this is my first time writing a novel, so let me know what you think. I'd appreciate all your feedback on how to make this work better. Also, the chapters I will be posting will be first drafts, so semi-rough editing and proofing. I will usually post on weekends (Saturday and/orSunday), but sometimes I will post during the week....
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