Hello everyone, due to some thinking and a helpful review I have decided my ending for God''s doorjustis not satisfying enough to be called a good ending...So I''mbotching the whole thing..well at mostly the later alter part of the epilogue. within a week, I should have the better, going by my standards, endingout. Sincelike the main character I feel a burning in my chest about it. But seriously thanks for the comments and reviews. I really glad I can max this thing better. Plus I kindof began mulling over the idea of extending this short story into maybe two of them. as I fell the plot would allow my to take the reins and drive it a little farther. I have no set date for the second short story so justhold yourselves while I come up with it.Taken from Royal Road, this narrative should be reported if found on Amazon.