Hello everyone.


    I have recieved many comments about the story and my writing. As you may have noticed, this story has indeed begun to pretty much contradict itself in a way. During my time writing this story, I would notice the mistakes or they would be pointed out, and I would attempt to fix them by writing a solution to said problems. One may write like that, but in the end, I am only trying to prolong the actual problems and the lack intrigue this story could create. In the end, I am growing quite disastified with the way I am writing this story. Some might say it was inevitable considering that I''ve been writing each chapter spontaneously, but for me, that is not good enough.


    I have learned a lot from this experience and all of my readers who commented or messaged me, letting me know of certain plot holes or mistakes that I may have made. With that information, I hope to write a better story, one which people can enjoy and find exciting, wihtout goinig through too many dull moments (I will try, but spare me, I am still an amateur).


    In essence, yes. I am no longer continuing this story. I hope to come up a with a better idea and write it better so that both my new readers and I, as an author, can be satisfied. I am sorry for those who found enjoyment in this short piece of writing and would like me to continue, and I also apologize for dropping this story, which can be quite frustrating as a reader.


    The genuine version of this novel can be found on another site. Support the author by reading it there.


    I am not asking for forgiveness, just your understanding.


    I also know that I didn''t have many readers in the first place, at least compared to the better ranking stories (not that I''m ungrateful). This is just my way as an author and a reader to let you guys know of the situation rather than leaving people hanging, which I hate the most.


    I want to thank you guys for your time. If you guys will allow it, I hope to continue our journey together in the near future, one where I can put my new ideas into words and hope to share them. I may still not write as well then, nor will it be close to perfect, but in the end, all I can do is try.


    Yours truly,


    Marine


    P.S. If anyone would like to take this story for themselves, feel free to do so.