Hey everyone,


    Still writing, but it looks like the story''s about peaked in reviews, so I thought I might look at an alternate book title. A few people have said Loser of Tarinath is a terrible title, and I agree, but I was kind of playing around to see if something called that could actually do well. One of the underlying ideas of the story was to see if I could turn the name Loser into something that didn''t make you cringe after a while. Still working on that part.


    Anyway...titles. I''m really not a marketing kind of guy, so I''m listing a few ideas and would appreciate feedback, or even suggestions.


    Oh, I have this thing for exclamation points. It''s a sickness, so don''t hate.


    In no particular order--


    Kicked in the Balls: Jake''s tale


    Adventures in Tarinath


    Sentenced to Tarinath


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    Asskicker of Tarinath


    (not sure this one could be posted, but I kind of liked it)


    Mace to the Face: Jake''s adventures in Tarinath


    Heal this!


    How you like them kittens!!!


    (Just kidding, and no, it''s not a question. Yell it like you mean it!!)


    Lots of Sex!: Adventures in Tarinath


    (Going for the lowest common denominator. Oh, and truth in advertising is right out. It would also be kind of interesting to see what kind of reviews I would get)


    Blunt Weapons: Less blood...More pain!


    Holy Fire: Feel the Burn!


    Blood & Brains: Living in Tarinath


    (Figured it would grab the fight junkies)


    Kill them All: Problem solving in Tarinath


    (Again, going for the violent crowd)


    So, give me your thoughts.