Ten chapters in, (well nine, actually, if you exclude Chapter Zero) I''ve listened to some... Issues, with pacing especially in five. I updated the controversial chapter five today, added some flesh to it. (Feel free to read it again. It''s at least more enjoyable now.) With that said, I will not be releasing a chapter today, since the next one would be a little bigger than the others, I''d want more than twenty hours to spend on it so that I can lessen the screw up. But rest assured, after its release tomorrow, the daily release will go back to normal.The narrative has been taken without permission. Report any sightings.


    I''d appreciate any feedback via comments or review on what you think about the quality, story, or yeah issues.


    Meanwhile, here''s a poll for you guys.