I went throught and revamped the first block of chapters today, nothing world changing. Nothing worth re-reading unless you are interested in voicing an opinion on whether it feels smoother or not.


    Most of what I did is fix capitalization, added/modified some sentence''s to try and give the people a more human feel and not vocal information banks.


    I also went through and fixed the SYSTEM message boxes thanks to a suggestion from Butterz, which actually led me into fixing the same missing pieces and addign a few more. starting tomorrow I will be trying to put a chapter in once every 2-3 days. that is a conservative estimate since I''ll be starting class again tuesday and I dont know exactly what my homework situation is going to look like


    I could probably churn them out on a daily basis, and I''ve got a few chapters planned out in my head and started on paper but if I take the time to write them, set them aside for a bit and come back fresh I can get a solid edit before they drop and I think it will be more efficient and better all around.Unauthorized reproduction: this story has been taken without approval. Report sightings.


    We will return to our regularly scheduled post''s tomorrow.


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    Since this is my first full author post I''m going to add in here that I''m going to try my hardest to keep the MC from going full OP, I love reading OP stories, but I get frustrated when the MC all of a sudden becomes either too hesitant, or too stupid to use their gained powers.


    I want our MC to come off as a mercenary. Mercs dont forget, and they never waste an advantage so growth will be slow, and those of you that read a bit further into the leveling system of the first chapter are going to catch that I''ve already built in what I am refering to as my ''fail-safe'' if I get to that point before I''m ready.


    The SYSTEM screens are probably going to be sparse most of the time, I''ll have some chapters that will be catch-ups on them, the next for example is going to bring out the rewards, I need to ''build'' the system shop, and there are a few skills/magic to be learned. I ''m going for more of a semi-hard litRPG (Be prewarned, I may be 30, but I am a child. If I see a genital joke I''m going to jump on that like paris hilton at an all you can suck dick buffet)


    So I will have stats that need to be kept, and I''m all up on how to use excel, but they are not what I want to push my story forward.


    I guess I''ve got that out of my sytem