Hello there.


    Please make sure to read the new versions of Chapter 1 and the Prologue. Tell me what you think.


    Thank you so much to Karakazz for assisting me in my editing. He''s a good writer but he doesn''t now it, so I have to tell him to make a web novel.The tale has been taken without authorization; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.


    Anyway, back to the topic at hand, I am going to try to get 2 chapters out tomorrow. ~1,000 words each. I''ll start adding characters later on, but for now, it''s solo. I hope you guys can give me feedback with the chapters.


    Again, Karakazz will be helping me with them, but we still need suggestions and ideas for it. If you have any, please tell us in the comments.


    Thank you,


    Reid - Author, proofreader.


    Karakazz - Helper, editor, proofreader.