Hello there everyone, It’s IonicNeko! I looked at some of your criticisms in my novel, and I decided to go in a short hiatus to fix the first two chapters, because I can’t agree more that I didn’t start it off strong!


    I’ve been so busy with many things but I will try to fix and edit the two chapters within a week. I already have 3 new chapters ready but I’ll release them altogether with the edits.Unauthorized reproduction: this story has been taken without approval. Report sightings.


    I’m really sorry, I know this is inconvenient, especially because it’s in the beginning, I’m really passionate about this story and it’s better if I fix it now than never fixing it at all.


    If you guys have anymore flaws to point out in my novel, feel free to do so! Again I’m really sorry about this, it is my first novel and what not.


    Thankyou! See you soon! ^_^