Thanks for giving me your opinon on the last question. I''ll let him keep everything he got. I have a new one.


    I am going to change the first two chapters, because apparently they just suck. Should I come up with something completely new? Or is there something specific that is just bad in those two chapters??This text was taken from Royal Road. Help the author by reading the original version there.


    I was thinking to just have him just start out in camp, and have flashbacks instead. The only annoying part would be that I might have to go back and change stuff in some other chapters.


    Also, next chapter is done, but going through an editor at the moment. When they are done, I''ll post it up.


    This post and the previous one will go down once the new chapter is up.