Chapters 1-20 have been updated. Let me know what you think. Chapterr 1 is a bit different now. I got rid of a bunch of the "front loading", and disguised it as story telling.


    Tomorrow I will be putting up the last half of the book.The genuine version of this novel can be found on another site. Support the author by reading it there.


    I know, not a whole lot of updates, my new job is killing me. Last week I did an 85 hour week (a lot of learning new systems - got IT), so yay? That''s why I didn''t manage to get this all updated until today, instead of on Sunday like I was aiming for.


    Ohh, also book 2 is going to start being posted soon. I''ve been at work and I have also been  working </img>