This is not a Chapter. I am making this post in hopes that all people who have read a majority of my book weill leave s comment on this post giving ideas/ suggestions/ criticisms on how my story can be improved. So any of you great people who plan to continue reading my novel. If you somehow have no suggestions then feel free to ask questions about the story if you would like. To anybody who hasnt read my story please read it before commenting, thank you.The tale has been stolen; if detected on Amazon, report the violation.


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