I am aware of the comment that people would rather have a slower, more detailed story.


    But I don''t want a boring story, where characters do nothing but chatting non-funny stuff or passing most of the chapters just describing things in the world instead of living it.This tale has been unlawfully lifted from Royal Road; report any instances of this story if found elsewhere.


    thing is, I have thought how to make " normal situation " interesting but it doesn''t seem I find the way to do it in my novel. I will try to re-adapt my story if I get inspired. For the moment I have to think of a way to improve it before continuing it in a wrong way.


    If I don''t find the way to do it the way I want, I will probably drop the novel.


    Still, thanks for reading.