As I mentioned in the last chapter of part-1, the story is rushed to end. I had been struggling with this fic for quite some times before I decided that I can''t keep on writing like this.


    There are readers who are disappointed by how the story was written. As a writer, perhaps I am disappointed more by the result of my writing than them.


    I realized there are many characters that aren''t used as they should be. I try to write a several intertwined story lines but it doesn''t turn out the way I want it to be. I try to write a harem where the relation between the mc and the girls is realistic and realize that it''s hard to write something closely romantic with a normal couple, it''s definitely beyond my ability to pull such thing out of a harem setting.


    I keep on writing, but the more I write, the farther it is from the way I visioned it in the first place.


    Writing began to feel more like a burden than fun, but I don''t want to leave it hanging either. That''s how I wrote chapter 103.


    I don''t want to leave it without an end. With chapter 103, at least there is something that resemble an end. At the same time, the end still leave me a path to write the 2nd part.


    Stolen from Royal Road, this story should be reported if encountered on Amazon.


    The last few days, I try to re-write part-1 and plan a plot based on the characters in part-1. But it''s getting more and more like a completely another story with an mc who happen to have same name.


    My other plan is to accept part-1 as is, and begin to write part-2 as a story that was born from part-1 but have its own life. People can read part-2 just fine, without having to read part-1. If they want to, they can read part-1 to get more insight.


    Once again I would like to say thanks to those who read this story this far. I would like to hear your opinion about whether I should re-write part-1 or just leave it as is. Since from the way I see it, if I do re-write part-1, many things will change.


    I also wonder, if I do re-writing part-1 would you (readers) prefer the game like leveling or the xianxia cultivation more? I find the game like leveling is quite interesting but since I wrote without a good plan, I got burdened with trying to get as far as possible from God and Devil''s World setting, that I decided to take the xianxia cultivation route.


    Thanks for anyone who''re willing to throw some opinions.