This story has been rewritten into something beeter and won''t make me cringe. Please check it out. I feel like I did everything just a little bit better. It''s called Death''s Embrace and so far everything seems fine. The problem with me writing stories is that I have a cool idea but I end up messing it all up because I was rushing to get a certain part in my head rather than letting the story play out. This time, I KNOW i can do it right. SO please join me guys, and please have faith that I can give you another story, a better story, that you will enjoy. This time, I''ll take my time. This time, I''ll take it slow.This story has been taken without authorization. Report any sightings.