This story has been rewritten into something beeter and won''t make me cringe. Please check it out. I feel like I did everything just a little bit better. It''s called Death''s Embrace and so far everything seems fine. The problem with me writing stories is that I have a cool idea but I end up messing it all up because I was rushing to get a certain part in my head rather than letting the story play out. This time, I KNOW i can do it right. SO please join me guys, and please have faith that I can give you another story, a better story, that you will enjoy. This time, I''ll take my time. This time, I''ll take it slow.Support the creativity of authors by visiting the original site for this novel and more.