hi guys like you see the first vol end


    1.so I want to hear how it was, it was my first ever story?


    2.what I can improve?


    3.ideas to powers for our Characters to get?This content has been unlawfully taken from Royal Road; report any instances of this story if found elsewhere.


    4.the next world our characters go to and what will be there mission?


    5.interesting new Characters to join the group?


    few things you need to know


    1. Englishisn''tmy first language


    2. I do it four fun


    3.there will not be a chapter in the next few weeks until I decide where our Characters go next


    4. don''tforget to follow\rate\comments  the story it gives me push to keep writing the story and improve