Hi Guys, I had some additional free time this week so managed to go back over the posted chapters and update them, taking into account some of the comments and sugegstions for improving the sotry so far. These have not affected the overall story in any way, but I believe they add depth to Jacob''s character and go into a bit more detail about his actions, as well as extending the quotes at the begining of each chapter. So no need to re-read them unless you want to as they will not affect the story in any way.Unauthorized duplication: this narrative has been taken without consent. Report sightings.


    In other news tomorrows chapter is on schedule and is promising to be the longest one yet!!!!!


    Have a great day!