Just in time before Halloween! I want to thank all of you guys for your patience and understanding. The revisions for the current chapters of Alpha Agent are finally here. Here''s what the changes entail:
- General fixes to typos and spelling errors throughout the story (mostly thanks to you guys). Please continue to point out any more in the comments!
- More hard stats on Michael Cynosa. We finally see Michael''s full stats as an agent before the heist.
- An addition in the first few chapters of the series that overtly outlines the ranking system instead of readers having to infer info from character interactions and statements.
- Foreshadowing: Dan''s berserk and glare ability are hinted at much earlier on in the series.
This story originates from Royal Road. Ensure the author gets the support they deserve by reading it there.- Alpha Corp''s naming scheme for their cities or states are based on colors.
- The city where most of book 1''s conflict takes place is now called Amethyst.
- Stat categories are better explained at the beginning of the series.
- A "reflex" stat has been added for Alpha agents.
- Made minor tweaks to hint at how insidious the recruitment process of agents are (mostly applies to Alpha Corp, who are the lesser of the three evils).
- Dan''s training before joining Jane''s team is finally expanded. Chapters 4-5 have been updated to reflect this.
- Cut some cringe dialogue lol
- Helmet designs finalized. From book 2 and onwards, Dan and his teammates actually wear helmets now!
The next chapters for AA3, the Combat Games arc, will be coming starting November 11th. I still need to sort out character stats and other hard numbers in the first half of the arc.