Thanks, everybody for reading this far. Having nearly 400 people following my story is a great shock to me. I know my skills are lacking in some areas. For example, revealing plot points too late, having too much of a slow progression of the plot, and similar things.Unauthorized usage: this narrative is on Amazon without the author''s consent. Report any sightings.


    However, I truly believe I am improving when compared to my initial chapters. As I said before, this is the first real novel I have been committed to. I have learned tons throughout writing this novel so far that will surely help me both with continuing this story and other stories in the future.