Introduction: Detective Kelly is a small town detective with a chip on his shoulder and a new gruesome murder to solve. With no leads and a police chief breathing down his neck he vows that this time the murderer will not get away.  'Priceless Heart' is a short story I wrote a few years ago and I have been contemplating on making it into a novel. This is the first draft and I would love some feedback and if this story could be worthy of more attention. Thanks in advance....