Hey folks! I really wasn''t liking where I''d taken things with the end of chapter 3 and what I''d written for chapter 4. It was just too soon to be facing big angry predators and all the solutions felt a little too plot armourish, so I''ve decided to re-write the end of chapter 3, flushing it out to a better size in the process and taking things in a direction I''m much happier with.


    For those who don''t want to re-read the whole chapter, I''ll Include just the changed section here.


    Thanks for your patience while I learn this whole ~writing~ thing and I hope you like Chapter 3 MK II!


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