I think I''m done up to Chapter 17. One of the things I noticed was when I rewrite, I tend to expand, so I think I ended up adding about 4500 more words in those 17 chapters(In total, not per chapter).


    Feel free to let me know if you think I''m going in the wrong direction or if I should change things back.


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    Now if we could just get RR to give us an ability to post updates like this without having to include five hundred characters.


    MY plan is to complete the rewrite in two weeks, then I need to move the pages into a word doc. I have an editor that is going to take it and convert it into an epub so I can give it out on Pataron; it was a promise for Tier 3 or higher members.