I rewrote this novel and started to post it. I will leave this version on, too, just in case some people are still reading it or wish to compare it. However, I will post chapters quickly (2-3 a day) and remove the old version when finished.
A case of content theft: this narrative is not rightfully on Amazon; if you spot it, report the violation.
The changes in the new version are:
The MC is stronger and more assertive.
Isla is not so rough and bitchy.
Grace is scheming less.
The relationships occur within more normal parameters.
New art.
A more refined Magic System.
Hopefully, better writing.