I will describe any significant changes I make in the revision process of this story here.


    Planned changes:


    > The four chapters in Castle Bosporus will be moved to the Epilogue.


    > Additional conversations expanding upon the relationship between Izanagi and Tantalus will be added.


    > The conversation between Dogwood, Feldrast, and Tantalus will be added.


    > Maria Feldrast will be made into a Colonel to fix any confusion.


    > The descriptions of Feldrast, Svenheim, and Izanagi will be changed.


    > Many of the players'' statistics and the rate of progression will be changed.


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    > The title will be changed to Ferrum Online.


    > Many of the uses of brackets will be changed to bold lettering.


    > The titles of the early chapters will be changed to better fit with the current naming convention.


    > Some of the chapters might be added together if I feel that certain chapters are too short.


    > Most of the chapters will be renumbered once I am done with the other changes.


    > I will read through the story and make changes wherever necessary to make it sound better.


    Changes:


    > The title has been changed to Ferrum Online.


    > The cover art has been changed.


    > The chapters describing the events in Castle Bosporus have been moved to the Epilogue.


    > Some character descriptions have been changed.


    > Most uses of brackets have been changed to bold lettering.


    > The System has been significantly overhauled.


    > Maria Feldrast has been made a Colonel.


    > Many chapters have been consolidated.


    > Most chapter titles have been changed.


    > Trismegistus has been replaced with Mozaic in the operation with the S-ranks at the end of Day 2.


    > Izanagi now dies after his battle with the Second Dark Apostle.