I wasn''t happy at all with the first chapter. When I re-read it after posting it, I realised I don''t like writing it in third person; I don''t get that same feeling of immersion as writing in first person gives me. And then in the process of trying to completely re-write it in first person, I came up with Divine Conquest, which has been getting all my attention, but at some point I will finish the re-write of chapter one, and I might look at continuing the story, but a chapter one re-write will definitely happen at some point.


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