Ok, so like I said, nothing too crazy changed. It’s important for later though so I wanted to find a good spot to stop and get this done. I might change some spacing or a word here or there in some other chapters, but I just didn’t list those. No point getting into the minutia of editing. If it wasn’t fun for me I doubt it’ll be fun for you lol.


    P.S. Seems like most of y’all caught this on your own, but the edit to Amos being taken is in “Amos: Exit” not Return.


    Clergy: Ruin: Updated Mary’s name to Mariam.


    Ethan: Shadow of a Name: Ethan now spots and comments on the estates of the founding families estates and the Royal Villa.


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    Amos: Alone in the Woods: Updated Grandpa’s appearance.


    Amos: Exit: Slightly altered the final moments before Amos is taken.


    Clergy: One More Time: Again, changed Mary’s name to Mariam.


    Ethan: Difficulties: Updated Jensen’s appearance


    Daniel Sando: Basin Tour: This is the only little change I’ll post cause this was driving me crazy. When I first went to upload the chapter it said it was 2,000 words, but when it posted it was 1,999. I’ve read this so many times and I don’t know where that one word went, but if I have ocd it was in hyperdrive, so now I literally just added 3 words. I couldn’t take it ??